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AvengedOutcast
Fri, 4 Feb 2011 22:04:00 GMT
My Machinima Remake Preview

Please let me know what you think, and give me some constructive criticism. I would very much appreciate it. I have been working hard on this series, and since I have some new things, I think I can give the series a great reboot that it needed. Thanks everyone.

Revan
Sat, 5 Feb 2011 05:02:00 GMT
Re: My Machinima Remake Preview

Loving the angles and overall camerawork. I can also certainly say, you've accomplished more with a machinima than I ever have. The voice acting, hmm...it's pretty good. Probably better than I'd ever be able to do. (I absolutely suck at voice acting, although Drakortha seems to think otherwise. Lol. :D). Editings pretty awesome.

Also, digging the channel, dude. The style of your channel is awesome. I only wish my channel looked as good. Lol. *shrugs*

avengedoutcast
Sat, 5 Feb 2011 05:14:00 GMT
Re: My Machinima Remake Preview

Thanks man. I really appereciate the compliments. If Drakortha thinks you're a a great voice acotr, then I would most certainly say that you are. =D Also, the channel layout wasn't made by me, but one of my friends that have left YouTube for good. I'm shocked you didn't say anything bad about the camera angles. That's usually something that I feel ashamed of. The voice acting from this guy is amazing. The lines he's turned in sound awesome, and on top of that, he just portreys the character so well, and shows great emotion in his lines. I'm quite happy with him. Also, don't get down about your machinimas. I used to think mine were overly stupid and boring, but I have had a bunch of amazing Machinma artists give me compliments. Drakortha, Mans1ay3r, and even TRiBViDS. That compels me to continue going. I think if I set my mind to it and have a positive attitude, then I can make some serious Machinimas. I actually want to bring back Machinima for its glory of making a movie with a game engine rather then killstreaks and all of that stupid joke. Look at me ramble. Sorry about that. I got carreid away. ^_^

Revan
Sat, 5 Feb 2011 11:02:00 GMT
Re: My Machinima Remake Preview

Think nothing of it. I usually like a lot of things, this being one of them. I guess I'm easily amazed and wow'd, but I dunno. But it's what I truly think, so I suppose you love the honesty.

Once I get my gaming machine back up, I'm gonna try and go full fledged with filming in Oblivion, Fallout 3, and Fallout: New Vegas. I just think it's time I get more serious with machinima, thus why I made a couple of threads about my work. One of which asks the community what they think of my ideas and, well, the other one showing off my main project I'm going for. And hey...you remind me so much of myself. Biased against their own work, but want people to say what they honestly think? Yeah. I have a lot of things I need to work on myself regarding self-improvement. Such as, my camera angles and editing maybe good or at least decent (even though I still don't like my stuff), but my execution getting into actually filming it is lacking. I say I should get into my games to film, but I put them off constantly and a month later I finally do it. And I also need to work on getting more familiar with the engines I'm working with. Like with filming my first FO3 machinima, "Annoying Man Makes A Friend", I only had two NPCs looking at each other. No real emotion. And Sticky 'talking' didn't really look all that convincing. There are so many things I could've done well that I half-assed on or learned to do, before doing that video. Instead of merely having Sticky look at a Deathclaw, I could have learned NPC movement in the G.E.C.K. and have him annoy the Deathclaw to, well, death...or Sticky's death....whatever. Point is, I could've delivered the machinima better. Maybe I should remake it now that I have a few more things I can use?

Also, at the thing regarding your channel, ah, well...it's still very nice looking regardless. All I have for my channel's background is the Vault 101 door. That's about it. Wish it were a Vault 13 door, though. Or an unhinged, lying on the ground Vault 15 door with a creepy worn out vault entrance.

Also regarding my acting. Thank you. I'm only on his mailing list, that's about it. I'm half tempted of sending him some random lines for no reason. I think I might do that in a few.